Учеба и наука

Проверти грамотность составленного текста, и напишите, где и какие я допустил ошибки... - вопрос №1825684

My name is Nikolay. I am young, I am 21 years old. I was born in the city of Orenburg, because of big crime rate, our family moved. Now I live and I work in the city of Sovetsk. I work in police at the patrol and point-policeman's position. My basis a task is control of offenses and administrative offenses. For further career development I need education and therefore I combine work with study at Moskow university of finance and law. In 5 years I will be entitled the second lieutenant and I will be able to pass to a higher position.

Sovetsk (till 1946 — Tilsit). The second for the population number after Kaliningrad

The abundance of green zones, squares and parks, flowers on balconies in combination with numerous monuments of architecture do Tilsit-Sovetsk by the real garden city.

январь 31, 2016 г.

Сообщить о нарушении

Всего ответов: 1

Светлана

23-й в Учебе и науке

5.0 17 отзывов

Здравствуйте! Как вариант....

My name is Nikolay. I am young, I am 21 years old. I was born in the city of Orenburg. Our family had to move into another city because of big crime rate in Orenburg. Now I live and work in the city of Sovetsk. I work for Police as a patrol and point-policeman. My duty is to control offenses and administrative offenses.
For further career development I need to get higher education and therefore I combine work with study at Moskow university of finance and law. In 5 years I will get the rank of second lieutenant and I will be able to apply for higher position.
Sovetsk (till 1946 — Tilsit). Sovetsk is the second city after Kaliningrad by population.
The abundance of green zones, squares and parks, flowers on balconies in combination with numerous monuments of architecture make Tilsit-Sovetsk a real garden city.